Liz Auction - Wip 6a - Scene 2 Draft (Patreon)

So it's been a while since I've posted anything for the $2 tier*. Even longer since I've posted anything for a project that's actively in development.

Let's fix that!

The Liz Auction short (still unnamed...) comes in 4 scenes. This is scene 2's full screenplay:

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13 - Black screen. The sound of crowd chatter fades in. Elizabeth's cheery voice cuts in, powerfully projected as she announces on stage, with a noticeable reverb due to the acoustics of the large room.

ELIZABETH (cheerily, projected for everyone in the large room to hear): "Do I hear ten thousand? Anyone?"

14 - Fade from black to a close-up of Liz rubbing her hands on her ass. She is on stage, in her Auction outfit. As she says "this", she slaps her ass emphatically with both hands, to get a loud slap and a good jiggle.

ELIZABETH (cheerily): "I think we all know that *THIS* phat ass is worth at *LEAST* ten K!"

15 - Neck-up shot of Elizabeth as she raises an arm to point into the unseen audience.

ELIZABETH: "Ten K, right there! Thank you, beautiful!"

16 - Full-body shot of Elizabeth posing on stage, hand on her hip.

ELIZABETH: "How about twenty? Anyone want five-feet-nine-inches of curves for twenty thousand?"

17 - Close-up of Elizabeth smiling playfully

ELIZABETH: "Put your hand down, Jimmy. We both know you'll drop out at forty. Alright, that's twenty to Jimmy. How about thirty?"

18 - Mostly-full-body of Elizabeth slowly humping her hand, throwing her head back in exaggerated acting.

ELIZABETH (exaggerated acting): "My lips are so thirsty for a big gulp of man-milk."

19 - Close-up of Elizabeth humping her hand)

ELIZABETH (exaggerated acting): "Won't somebody drop thirty K and give me their baby batter?"

20 - Close-up of Elizabeth bringing her head back and opening her eyes, face returning from her exaggerated O-face to her usual warm smile. She giggles, before calling out back in her normal voice.

ELIZABETH (cheerily projecting again): "Thanks, babe! How about forty thousand?"

21 - Elizabeth jutting her belly out slightly, slowly rubbing her tummy.

ELIZABETH: "Surely *ONE* of you boys is willing to spend forty K, for the chance to put their bun in my cute little oven?"

22 - Over-the-shoulder shot of Elizabeth facing the audience. This is the first time the audience is visible. After Elizabeth delivers her line, someone in the back stands up and shouts out their bid.

ELIZABETH: "Don't you boys want to see my itty-bitty waist grow fat with your kids?"

AUDIENCE MEMBER: "One hundred thousand!"

23 - Close-up of Elizabeth going wide-eyed, as the crowd collectively gasps.

ELIZABETH (stunned): "One hun-wow! Well all right!"

24 - Elizabeth standing in an uncharacteristically strong (as opposed to sexy) pose, feet planted firm, both hands on her hips, in an almost teacher-scolding-student posture, as she speaks.

ELIZABETH (projecting cheerily again): "Someone in the back is obviously very eagerto start a family! Anyone here more eager than him? One hundred G's is the price to beat."

25 - Elizabeth shifts her hips, back into a sexy pose, and rotates her hands to instead trace her waist down to her legs, slowly tracing the curvature of her hips.

ELIZABETH: "For a hundred-ten, one of you boys can put these baby-making hips to good use!"

26 - Waist-up shot of Elizabeth nodding in affirmation, before cupping her breasts and jiggling them.

ELIZABETH: "That's one-hundred-ten. How about one-hundred-twenty? Anyone willing to give these a mouth to feed for one-hundred-twenty?"

27 - An audience shot of Strong Greek God (now Stocky Greek God in audience, sorry Innie! :X) raising his glowing-numbers paddle.

ELIZABETH: "That's one-hundred-twenty for the group in the middle-left. Do I hear one-hundred-thirty?"

28 - Liz bending over, ass toward the camera, as she rubs her hands slowly down her legs

ELIZABETH: "Anyone at all? One-hundred-thirty for this fine piece of tail?"

29 - Close-up of Liz's face, still bent over

ELIZABETH: "No? No one?"

30 - Camera focusing on where Liz's head will be when she stands up, which she promptly does. She lets out a big breath, before smiling and gesturing toward the audience.

*ELIZABETH lets out big breath as she stands back up from bending over*

ELIZABETH: "Well all-right then! A hundred-and-twenty thousand, to these fine gentlemen here! Can you please stand up, boys?"

31 - Camera whips over to the group of 5 standing up (fuck animating them sitting up; that's why the camera is panning, rather than cutting, to give them time to stand up)

ELIZABETH: "Ooh, another group. You're my third in two weeks!"

33 - Close-up of Elizabeth as she gives a short, single chuckle to herself.

ELIZABETH (less projected, but still projected): "Not the biggest one, though."

32 - Full-body of Elizabeth gesturing for them to come on stage

ELIZABETH (projecting cheerily again): "Well, come on up boys. Let's get this show started."

33 - Close-up of Elizabeth's warm, smiling face.

ELIZABETH: "You can take your clothes off at the base of the stage."

34 - Extreme close-up of Elizabeth's mouth

ELIZABETH: "I can't wait for you boys to give me your loads."

35 - Fade to black.

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If you'd like to see the WIP pictures associated with this update, then click here.

* though I will be posting another thing shortly; I've actually had it written since the beginning of last month, but things have been keeping me from posting it)