Synopsis - Blue Star S1E1 (Draft 1) (Patreon)

Hey all!

So, this is the first draft for the first episode of Blue Star.

CLICK HERE to read it online, or download it as attached to this post below.

There are a few things that need to be revised - namely, the bar in the club couldn't be turned into an island in the scenebuild, meaning I will have to rethink how that all works. The bar being an island was critically important to the structure of the scene, because it gave Jack something to look at while being able to not see Liara, until just the right time.

And then there is the "And then they banged" one-liner to sum up the sex. That is how I write sex scenes in early drafts - the details of the sex aren't important for the narrative, and so I just write "And then they banged" as a placeholder, to return to once I've figured out the particulars of the sex scene and the rest of the narrative is written.

The sex scene is, indeed, figured out (and posed out), and so when I revise the draft I will properly fill that in. This upcoming Wednesday, I will also be posting the sex scene WIPs - it is composed of 9 unique positions, with the following break-down:

3 analingus poses

1 breast-sucking pose

1 cunnilingus pose

1 facesitting pose

3 tribadism / scissoring poses

The sex scene consists pretty much entirely of big-butt and big-boob worship, on Jack's part (worshipping Liara), and highlights their personality differences, with Jack being dominant and guiding the entire romp, and Liara being submissive and going with the flow. Jack's dominance and Liara's submissiveness are prevalent throughout the series, and can basically be summed as "Jack fucks, Liara gets fucked."

Over the next few days, I will try to write and upload two more synopses related to Blue Star: a synopsis of the series as a whole, and a synopsis of this pilot season. I don't know when exactly they'll go up, but I plan to get them up before next Monday.