Blue Star Episode 3 - Looking For Some Ideas For Finale! (Patreon)

So, first of all, let me predicate this by saying I'm not proud of the fact I've been directing this entire episode by the seat of my pants.

While it's given some (in my opinion) great animations and progressions in the 12+ minutes the sex scene has become, it also means that the entire writing process has been a constant struggle. I am a very methodical and systematic person, someone who plans every step in advance before I even begin. And so this entire sex scene development has been an uncomfortable experience outside my comfort zone. Good improvisational practice, but uncomfortable.

Similarly, if you've been a stalwart observer of the Episode as I've developed it, then you may recall that I have changed around my ideas for the ending a bit. The original idea was that the Shadowbroker goes through a cycle of fucking and creaming Liara's ass multiple times. That was then simplified to a simpler she-orgasms-he-orgasms-and-then-it's-done.

I have since decided to merge these ideas: Liara orgasms, Shadowbroker creams her, Liara thinks they're done, but Shadowbroker has other plans. From there on out is a montage of multiple loads blown, with even more being implied.

I have an ideal plan for this finale, and I suppose I should warn [SPOILERS] for those who like to keep their finales a surprise:

• 1.) Shadowbroker creams Liara's ass an implied 7 times, 3 explicit:
• 1a.) Cream #1: In the above position, after which Liara thinks they're done.
• 1b.) Cream #2: Shadowbroker holds Liara and masturbates with her, moving her up and down his shaft like a fleshlight
• 1c.) Cream #7: Pose unknown as of yet, but segues into revealing the Shadowbroker blew 7 loads total into her butt, and he intends to cream more than just her ass, and has her get on her knees to blow him.
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• 2.) Shadowbroker blows loads in Liara's mouth an implied 7 times, 1 explicit:
• 1.) Cream #4: Liara sucking and stroking, when he blows a load in her mouth and she swallows it. Afterwards, she comments on how she's already swallowed 4 loads, and Shadowbroker responds saying they're going to break even with her ass, implying another 3 to go for another 7.
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• 3.) Shadowbroker blows loads in Liara's pussy an implied 7 times. THIS IS WHERE I NEED ASSISTANCE.
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• 4.) Shadowbroker blows a final load on Liara's face, concluding the sex scene.

As I say above, I need assistance with the pussy shots. If you have any ideas for this, I would absolutely love to hear them. HOWEVER, there are some caveats to be aware of:

• 1.) Shadowbroker can't fuck her pussy (can't get the full head in). This is both a narrative restriction (the entire set-up is "I'm too big for your pussy, so I guess it's anal for you!") and a physical restriction (the pussy doesn't open wide enough).
• 2.) It's against the established character of the Shadowbroker for him to pleasure himself - he has to use Liara in some way. This is to say that him just keeping the tip in her and jerking himself off for 7 orgasms is out of character. He has to satisfy himself with Liara in some way.
  3.) The range of positions are limited due to the Shadowbroker's legs. They behave really fucky with anything closer to the ground than a sitting position, and any extreme angles of his pelvis cause the legs to buckle. This means that anything that involves Liara being on the ground is highly likely to fail.

The way that this narrative is built up, removing the pussy shots really fucks up the flow of this finale. It would then go blowjob straight to facial, which undermines some of the planned dialogue and fatigue on Liara's part, and would be decidedly less punchy.

Similarly, I can't really rearrange anything, because the anal has to come first, and the facial needs to come last, if I want to maintain this Act 3 climax. That doesn't leave a lot of choices in between.

I really wrote myself into a box here, but if we can figure out this pussy-shots issue, then I know this will be an amazing finale to this episode, and I really hope it will justify to most of you this long wait - with 5-to-7 explicitly shown cumshots, and a total of 20+ implied, I think it would be approaching how many full cumshots' worth of blue-balling I've done with constantly delaying and extending this episode! :P

Note that I have had someone suggest biotic fields to eliminate the physicality of position restrictions, where Liara is suspended in a biotic field and therefore can be put into any position without gravity or physics causing problems. This is a viable route to take, but it doesn't solve the problem of what positions to actually use for the pussy cumshots, nor does it solve the issue of how he is stimulated to subsequent orgasms.

So, let your creative juices flow, and let your imaginations go wild, everyone! I will continue trying to crack this code on my end, but I would really appreciate having some ideas thrown out. Even if they're not total solutions, but just hints at what I could do, that can go a long way toward me getting inspired and solving this issue.

So let me know what you all think!