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Anonymous

Can never go wrong with Mass Effect girls.

Quentin Corvus

I'm not sure if it's a mass effect reference but the "about" in the quote doesn't really make sense conversationally in English.

Quentin Corvus

And of course, incredible art.

Quentin Corvus

I did know, I was trying to be friendly and helpful. Your English is still better than many native speakers and Mass Effect does have some dialogue issues, so I thought it was possible it could have been an actual Mass Effect quote.

Jacogram

Nah I just made it up, thanks for the suggestion anyway, what lines of dialogue would've been more correct?

Quentin Corvus

Another way you might write it: "Commander, I really felt the need to discuss... something..." It keeps the same structure and is a bit more conversationally natural. Putting a pause between discuss... and something... could seem coy or playful. You could also go with a direct Mass Effect reference and say something like, "Commander, it's time for you to slap some omni-gel on me."