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Couple Stuff Feedback (Patreon)

Published:
2023-03-06 01:24:04
Imported:
2023-03

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Couple Stuff is done! It's been a fun project, but now it's about time I asked you all what you thought of it. Please be honest, I'll take things constructively and try to take what I can into account for future projects!

So vote on the options you most agree with, and if you have specific feedback you'd like to offer, please leave a comment. I'd really appreciate it.

Comments

B

I'm probably in the minority here but I would have liked a bit of relationship drama (second thoughts about gaining, reassurance, etc), but it would have clashed with the mood I felt this was going for.

jlixirium

I enjoyed the concept, the story, the formatting, and the fats. However, I would have liked there to be more conversations between the characters about the struggles that are inherent of a feedist relationship, coming to resolutions that celebrate the the characters and their fetish. In conjunction, I didn’t like the big time skips — I would have preferred to have seen the wg steps in between 👌 Overall, though: fantastic work, Salt!

Anonymous

It was very good. I just wish it was longer and that you'd sell printed copies.

Anonymous

I liked the comic overall, but i wish more time was spent in the space between being chubby and obese. Great work!

Anonymous

This may sound like an odd consideration, but one thing that I noticed is that your characters seem to get taller as they gain weight. In this case, since there was such a difference in time and weight between scenes, it feels pretty pronounced. Since they gained significant weight between scenes, it feels pretty apparent.

Anonymous

Trying to Make this Quick: *Character Designs were good, but not favorites (B - B+) *Story took a little bit to get going starting out (Elevator onward tho, I was hooked, B+) *Storyboarding and Paneling was Really Good (A) *Length...I'm half-and-half on the final act (a jump ahead in time was good, but it felt like if we're going to jump ahead in time, more development or "Things" would have happened in said time jump. Still always appreciate the bigger sizes, but it didn't feel like much happened once we jumped ahead... so either a shorter comic with the early looks, or a longer time to enjoy the later looks...B-) Overall, pretty good, and certainly stands its own in the Feast For The Eyes Series, Thanks for your hard work!

Anonymous

I really enjoyed the story 🥰 it was the main reason I joined your patreon!! The blushing and all was too cute but especially the bellies <3

RoosterJacket

Personally I would've preferred if only one of them got fat, but that's not really helpful feedback lol Overall, really enjoyed Couple Stuff and I can't wait to see what's next!

Anonymous

I absolutely loved it. Just thought the time skips could happen more gradually, or less. It was one of the best comics I've ever read!

Phat94

Definitely your best comic, and the art was fantastic throughout, you should be very proud of this indeed. However, the thing that gave the early comic it's spice was that aspect of opening up about your kink, and the joy of having your partner accept it. Their relationship in the first part was very sweet and well done. I feel like the comic really lost that unique selling point following the mutual gain reveal and the big timeskips.

Jazzflaps

Loved the comic in general. Only thing I'd really wanna change would be making some of the timeskips shorter but that's mostly because I like the comic and want there to be more of it.

Anonymous

Loved the concept, and the comic. The characters were great, very relatable. I would have loved to of seen more of a character arc, really get to know the characters. A slow, steady progression of weight over the story would have had a much better impact for me. The constant time skips kinda took me out of the story. After about three years of weight gain I think they were a little too big. It would have been much hotter for me if their sizes were more realistic.

That one guy

Really loved this comic, but I can definitely think of a few gripes. First of all, I've seen a fair share of wg artists make comics with an actual plot, and you've got the best by a long shot. Many don't really seem to take pacing into consideration, but this was kept concise and the appeal doesn't wear off because of that. Like many here have said I think the timeskips cause problems though, seeing these two grow more gradually would've been something special, especially considering that what we got was so good. Much more positively though these two both have great character designs. Although the short haired one (I am awful about remembering names sorry) If I remember correctly looks a lot like one of your other ocs. Great job on their posing to, really brought out their personalities. As far as paneling goes I thought it was alright. I'm no expert but I think the paneling got worse towards the end, but that might just be because it's a bit difficult to appreciate their size when the panels are so small. And all the full art pages are outstanding as usual. For what this is this is a solid 9/10 and does a really good job of expanding on these characters. Pun 110% Intended

Seasoned Sheldrake

The only real issues I have with it are just personal little things. I like stuffing more than WG so those first few pages were FANTASTIC to me. I do wish there had been a bit more stuffing early on, but I know that you specifically do WG stuff so that was just a little wish of mine, I mean hell, look at what I post on my page lol. Overall, yeah, I liked it a lot. It's what initially got me to join your Patreon in the first place :)

Anonymous

Idk what everyone else is saying but I adore this comic. I used to feel bad about having a fat fetish, and content like this reminds me that it has a place in the outside world.

GekkoV

I personally thought it was a little rushed and a bit too long at the same time. The feeding hits the ground running and doesn't let up, which isn't bad in and of itself, but I was never sold on the characters' romantic chemistry. So despite its length, the only returns I felt were meaningful were the fanservice.

Splerm

Characters: The designs are wonderful, and Courtney has a lot of uniqueness to her with her hair highlights. The facial expressions and poses clearly showed that Courtney was more outgoing and Shannon was more timid. The biggest complaint I have are the names, as they’re never mentioned anywhere throughout the story and were only mentioned outside of the material. I had to look up the name of the red head before typing this. Even a small edit of a speech bubble within the first pages would go a long way in fixing this problem (“Are you really sure you want to do this Courtney?” “Don’t worry Shannon, I’ve been thinking about it more since we talked.”). Story: The story started off fairly strong and wanted me anticipating the next page. We knew it’d be a stuffing story but even after the phrase of “Let’s try it!”, it still wasn’t clear who would be feeding who, Love the little detail of Shannon fitting in the butterfly shirt that Courtney was now too big for near the end. After the midpoint of the comic after Shannon’s stuffing, the story seems to just rapidly skip ahead. It’s hard to pinpoint /why/ the story feels like it picks up the pace as we had time skips in the beginning as well. It might have more to do with just only having one page of Shannon being fat before skipping again to where she’s even more obese, and not getting enough attention to her gain as we did with Courtney. So one or two more pages of dates or outings might have made it more even. As far as the last page, the story just sort of... ends. Which is fine, but the dialogue and images make it appear like there’s supposed to be more after you turn the page. Although it’s hard to think of how else it could have ended since the main end goal is a simple concept for them to just be fatter, rather than an overaching plot like Sammy’s acceptance of being big. Personally, would have loved to see one or two panels of how exactly the extra fat affects them. Ripping an old dress, squeezing in a seat, etc. But again, that’s more of a personal preference and not a knock on the story. Though I think something like that could have played well since Shannon was clearly into this and Courtney seemed to enjoy egging her on. Length: The length is perfect, and I hope that your future comics go at or near the 20 page mark. It wasn’t too short to where it felt like a short updating progression picture and it wasn’t too long that it overstayed it’s welcome. Even with all the minor criticisms I have, this is still one of the best WG comics currently out there. Looking forward to the next project.

Anonymous

The design of the characters and the story of how they got fat was very good, but I honestly thought you were going to conclude with a time jump and put Shannon and Courtney on the couch after a few years as a reference to the place where it all started, second criticism, is that those names were missing because I am a reader who likes to know who is who to develop a love and feeling for the character, from there on it was very well developed but with a conclusion that could be better.

Anonymous

This story was what convinced me to join the Patreon so I could get the story sooner, so needless to say I liked it a lot. :D I can agree with some of the critiques, like showing more of the characters outside the fetish and skipping a little too much especially at the end. I am glad to hear that we'll see more of these characters, though, and I would love to see more of those times in-between those skips where things can be further fleshed out.

Anonymous

Story: Enjoyable. Length: Great. Characters: Great. Down the road I would love to see some more follow up pages with them! Not necessarily getting bigger, just more of everyday stories of them, being large and flirty, maybe going on a date or the inevitable beach episode. lol

ShoreMcLoving

I would like to see more nudity lol

bws
>>103425315

Thanks very much for the feedback! I'm glad you really liked the comic. The time skips are a common criticism, so it's definitely something I'll be considering more carefully in the future. Regarding Shannon's character design, which character do you think she looks a lot like? If you don't remember the name, if you could describe them by their hair color that would help. Thanks for the feedback on the paneling as well. I'll have to go back and look over the pages myself, but from memory I think the pages may have become more cramped. Paneling is a very important aspect of these comics to me so I really appreciate being told where it may be lacking. Thanks again!

bws
>>103426492

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you were still able to enjoy it despite it not being as much to your personal tastes!

bws
>>103460967

Thanks for the feedback! I'll consider it for the future.

bws
>>103474324

Thank you for the very thorough response! In regards to the names, that's a bit of an odd situation because I didn't even name the characters until over halfway through the comic's production. With FFTE projects I don't go in planning names or personalities for the characters beyond what is necessary, because I try to focus on the fanservice elements. However I do understand this criticism and if I ever release this comic on another platform in bulk, I probably will take your advice and slip the names in early on. I understand the criticism around the pacing, and it's also something I kind of noticed at the time while I was working on those pages. Unfortunately, I think it was a symptom of this originally being conceptualized as a much shorter project and when I decided to make it a longer comic, a lot of scenes were added/extended in the early portion but not as much in the latter. Regardless, it's something I'll try to work on more in the future. In regards to your personal wants, those are the kinds of things I would like to do with them in the future with supplementary pages and illustrations. So I hope you can look forward to those sometime in the future! Thanks again for the critique!

bws
>>103492802

Thanks for the feedback! Yes, those criticisms were quite common, so it's things I'll be keeping an eye on with future projects. Still, I'm glad you liked the comic and are looking forward to what I do with the characters in the future! Fleshing out some of those areas is something I'd definitely like to try and do.

Anonymous

i loved it, i think it's some of your best work to date! my only critique is totally subjective, and that's that the last few pages made me hope for just a little more greedy messy stuffing at the end, the two of them really turned into insatiable piggies at the trough. all in all i think it's wonderful though and your characterization and artwork is stronger than ever

Anonymous

Personally thought the pacing was fine - time skips were a little jarring, but I've always felt that timeskips are fine as long as you add some build up to any reveal for a timeskip. Maybe a just a few panels hinting at the next big weight before the actual reveal (close in shots, thumping footfalls, etc.) As for character's arcs, while I think it was cute to watch them gain together and I can see the teasings of Shannon also gaining with Courtney before she fully indugles, but it initially felt the story was setting up Shannon coming into her own as a feeder and that kinda being the central arc of her story. Being this supportive figure to someone who's willin to indulge her kink, and the confidence she grows from that, which we certainly saw towards the end, but I think didn't necessarily need her gaining as well, you know what I mean? I feel like Courtney, with that bigger ego, would enjoy all that attention on her and, in turn, enjoy how much it excites her partner to see the difference intheir sizes grow. Their personalities are great though and it's lovely to see a lesbian couple that is so open not only in their relationships, but with each other and their feelings, wanting to support each other on a journey. You've always done so well with kink, so there's really nothing to complain about in the fanservice department, and your stories, while short, always hit the right notes for fun and light. And if you chose to go darker, or keep it light, I think you'd excel either way~

Anonymous

I feel the ending was a tiny bit sudden