Stepbrother's Girl (Patreon)

This comes from a short inspired by a captioned image called “Stepbrother’s Girl”. Reviewers asked for more and one said: “You are a writer, not a caption star. Please make a story with developed characters. Stop teasing us!”.  Am I doing that?  Sometimes I think that characters like these two are best sketched by their actions so that the reader can add their own color.