[M/F] Competitive sex Lost ideas, backstories, etc. / 【男女】競技セックス 没案・裏話など (Patreon)

This is the first rough submission

最初に提出したラフ

At the first stage we had not even decided on a name.

At this stage, it was the opposite of the actual piece, since the woman was inviting the man to compete.

I remember well that my editor told me to make the women's boobs bigger.

I like adult female characters, so I drew both men and women as if they were adult characters.

I was told that young characters were better for erotic manga, so I made them younger.

最初の段階では名前も決めていませんでした。

このラフの文章からすると女から男を競技に誘ってるので、実際の作品と反対でした。

担当さんに女のおっぱいもっと大きくしてって言われたのをよく覚えています。

私は成人女性キャラが好きなので男女ともに成人のつもりで描いてました。エロ的には若い方が良いって言われたので若くしました。

The result is this.

結果こうなりました。

・Name origin, etc. / 名前元ネタ系

Koike＝小生

When connected, it becomes a 性.

Kyouko=交子

性 and 交 is 性交

The meaning of 性交 is intercourse.

Matsubara=松原

The 松 is taken from the name of the sex position.

In Japan, there is a sex position called 松葉崩し.

Komiya Teacher

In Japan, uterus is written as 子宮 in kanji.

小宮 and 子宮 can be read the same way. Komiya.

*This is not a normal reading. It usually reads like this. 小宮=Komiya 子宮=sikyu

"Komiya" is a Japanese surname that does exist.

Since it was not feasible to make the main character an adult female, I filled the tone and appearance of the teacher with elements I liked.

How many times have I imagined a lesbian part where Komiya teacher gives direct instruction to Kyouko?

小宮先生

子宮の子を小にしました。

メインキャラを成人女性にするのは叶わなかったので、先生の口調・見た目に好きな要素を詰めました。

私は小宮先生が交子に直接指導するレズパートを何回想像しただろうか。

Joukou Academy

It was taken from another word that has the same reading.

The meaning of 情交 is sexual intercourse.

条功学園

情交から取ってます。

・rejected draft / 没ネタ

This is a standing picture of the one that was not adopted after the first two proposals were submitted.

最初に二案提出して採用されなかったほうのキャラ立ち絵です。

It is a story about a different world, a world where there are two races, human and Adar (officially called Adar Toguzu people).

The story is about an abandoned heroine and a human man who have sex and open up to each other...

It is a world convenient for erotic comics, where Adar people are a race whose greatest pleasure is to have sex with humans.

Adar women: a race of Artificial vagina

Adar men: a race of dildo

When a human becomes an adult, he or she is allowed to have one or more Adar in his or her home, and the Adar man makes a contract with the human and becomes a full-fledged member of the family.

When they are abandoned, there is usually no one to take them (I'm talking about used Artificial vagina and the like that you don't want to use).

異世界系で、人間とアダール人（正式名称アダール・トグーズ人）という二つの種族が存在する世界の話です。

で、捨てられたヒロインの子と人間男がセックスして心を開いていくという話…

アダール人は人間とセックスすることが最上の喜びの人種というエロ漫画に都合の良い世界。

アダール人女：オナホァ族

アダール人男：ディルドゥ族

成人になると人間はアダール人を一人以上家に迎え入れることができて、アダール人は人間と契約して一人前になるとか。

捨てられるとだいたい貰い手がいない（中古オナホとか使いたくないよねって話

I had never drawn a manga about M/F , so I submitted two proposals, hoping for something gag-like anyway.

I'm glad they adopted one of them because I thought both would be rejected.

As you can tell from the competitive sex, I like to name them as they are.

I still suck at drawing men's bodies. I'm not that good at drawing women either.

まあ男女モノなんて描いたことなかったから、どうせ描くならネタっぽい感じでと2案提出したんですね…よく片方でも通ったな…

競技セックスからしてお察しの通り名前をまんまつけるの好きです。

いまだに私は男の身体描くのへたくそです。女もそんな上手いわけではないけど。